Analysis of Redeemed
Take away this memory,
Take away this pain.
Tell me everything you remember of me,
Tell me everything in vein.
Admit you didn't care,
Admit you had no shame.
Ask me the question if you dare,
Was there any gain?
I'll tell you this,
So listen good.
This is all bullsh*t,
Clearly you think I'm misunderstood.
Life isn't about you,
It isn't just about me.
It's about the picture we drew,
The hearts we set free.
So think about this when you're sitting there awake,
"Was our relationship as it seemed?"
Is that a feeling you can shake,
Was it something you dreamed?
Did you truly ache,
Just remember I am the one who is redeemed.
Scheme | ABABCXCB XDADEAEA FGFGFG |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 1011100 10111 1110101011 111001 011101 011111 11010111 11101 1111 1101 11111 10111001 110011 1101011 10101011 01111 110111110101 110010111 11010111 111011 11101 101011011101 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 603 |
Words | 117 |
Sentences | 11 |
Stanzas | 3 |
Stanza Lengths | 8, 8, 6 |
Lines Amount | 22 |
Letters per line (avg) | 22 |
Words per line (avg) | 5 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 159 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 39 |
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Submitted on June 25, 2012
Modified on March 05, 2023
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