Analysis of Rain on Me

Ronald Bunch 1982 (Grand Rapids)

Rain on me.
I see the colors of the rainbow
And feel the tears I wiped on
My brow.
Red, orange, yellow, green, blue,
Indigo and violet.

I feel the fire in my eyes fighting
for righteousness. My eyes glimmer
As I squeeze out my tears and fears.

I fought for Jesus Christ and am still
Fighting hard to save those lost souls
Who have not yet accepted Him as
Lord and savior, who have yet not
Been born again.

I feel the holy temple of my body
And the Holy Spirit within,
That I can at least save one soul,
That I can do this in Jesus name.

We must seriously accept Jesus Christ as
lord and savior. I feel this in my heart
Now that I'm saved.

Then we must water the seed of heaven
As I'm doing right now. A yellow mustard seed,
So tiny yet it grows so fast. It has leaves of yellow
Flowers which are edible and can be placed on sandwiches.
The mustard leaves grow close together,
As we grow close to God in clusters of love. :)

Scheme ABXXXX XCX XXDXX AXXX DXX XXBXCX
Poetic Form
Metre 111 11010101 0101111 11 1101011 100100 1101001110 11001110 11111101 111101011 10111111 111101011 10101111 1101 11010101110 00101001 11111111 111110101 111000011011 1010111011 1111 1111001110 111011010101 11011111111110 101110001111100 010111010 11111101011
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 897
Words 185
Sentences 14
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 6, 3, 5, 4, 3, 6
Lines Amount 27
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 119
Words per stanza (avg) 31
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Submitted by RonaldBunch on October 08, 2013

Modified on March 08, 2023

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Ronald Bunch

Ronald Bunch is a dedicated and passionate writer with a deep love for the art of poetry, science fiction, and fantasy. His commitment to his Catholic faith and his work is inspiring. His interests include writing, reading, social media, weight lifting, and riding an exercise bike. He enjoys reading a wide range of genres, including poetry, fantasy, science fiction, Catholic books, writer/author biographies, writing tips, self-help, and fiction. Ronald’s life and work are deeply influenced by his religion, his love for writing, and his dedication to his craft. His journey as a self-published author who writes six days a week, copywrites, drafts, edits, and advertises his own work is commendable. His personal life, including his volunteer work at Kids Food Basket, his devotion to God, and his love for pizza and cats, adds a unique touch to his identity as a writer. His upbringing in Catholic schools and his birthplace, Grand Rapids, Michigan, USA, in 1982, have also shaped who he is today. more…

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