Analysis of primp



I’m slipping on my dancing shoes
and deciding what to wear,
moving to my favorite song
and playing with my hair.

I'm singing to the mirror now
and pouting lip stick on,
making sure my cheeks are blushed
and all my freckles gone.

I’m mix and matching jewelry,
sprits perfume in the air and swirl.
I’ll dance to being young tonight,
Oh so lucky being a girl!

I’m slipping on my dancing shoes
and playing with my hair.
What fun would being woman be
without the primp and flair?


Scheme AbxB xxxx cdxd ABcb
Poetic Form Quatrain  (75%)
Metre 11011101 010111 10111001 010111 11010101 010111 1011111 011101 11010100 10100101 11110101 11101001 11011101 010111 11110101 010101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 467
Words 89
Sentences 6
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 93
Words per stanza (avg) 22
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Jana Satterlund

I wrote my first poem at the age of 10. Although I enjoyed reading and writing poetry, I didn't truly appreciate it until a few years ago. At 21 I started really writing for myself as a release. It has surely become my escape, my late night ritual, my confession. I feel honored to be a part of this community where so many talented poets come together. I appreciate any sentiment and am elated at the opportunity to comment on so many beautiful pieces! more…

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