Analysis of Perfect Rose



I want to be close to you.
Give me a chance to be more
like you.I ask for more knowledge
to help me be,more like Jesus,Son
of God divine.Jesus,the rose without
blemish,shame,or guilt.
Jesus is a perfect rose,a perfect
rose,but we hung perfection on
a cross.I want to be close to
you.Give me a chance to be more
like you,dear Lord.I strive to
be like perfect rose.I want to
be more like Jesus Christ,our
lord.Take me back Jesus when
I fisrt start with you.full me
with your blood Jesus angin.I
got to stay strong in this world
i live in at time this world can be
cold


Scheme ABCDEFGDABAABDHDIHJ
Poetic Form
Metre 1111111 1101111 1111110 111111 111101 11 101001101 1110101 0111111 1101111 111011 1101111 111101 111101 111111 111101 1111011 110111111 1
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 548
Words 125
Sentences 12
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 19
Lines Amount 19
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 440
Words per stanza (avg) 107
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Submitted on January 15, 2010

Modified on March 05, 2023

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