Analysis of Painting Salvadora



We used to dance badly on the hardwood floor
to a tiny white phonograph adorned
with cartoon faces in primary colors
spinning thrift store records with mismatched covers.
We painted each other's faces the first time we kissed;
I brushed her cheek with fingers,
she tinted mine with lips.
In a dream, I named her Sally, short for Salvadora,
who likes to dance badly on the hardwood floor.
We used to paint pictures in the room downstairs.
There was a black and white photograph of her
grandmother at age twenty--it could have been Sally
in a dark wig and glasses.
I would have remade Grandma in paint, had we lasted.
Now, though I still sing her song, sometimes I choke on her name,
while some nights, in dreams,
I still call her Sally, short for Salvadora,
who used to dance badly on the hardwood floor.


Scheme ABCCDCEAAFGHIJKLAA
Poetic Form
Metre 1111101011 101011001 1011001010 10110110110 1101101001111 1101110 110111 00111010111 1111101011 11111000111 1101011010 101110111110 0011010 1110110011110 11111010111101 11101 111010111 1111101011
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 786
Words 145
Sentences 7
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 18
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 35
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 636
Words per stanza (avg) 145
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Submitted on May 02, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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