Analysis of Pain



Bottled up it's all inside,
This feelings dead,
But I'm alive,
The pain it hurts,
Looking at me in the eyes,
I start to cry,
I hate this feeling,
I ain't surprised,
Just go away,
Don't bother me,
Don't stay here,
Just let me be,
Gimme space so I can breathe,
All this hurt it's killing me,
I can't stay here,
I need to leave,
Let me walk so I can see,
Where the f**k I need to be,
Cause you see my life has no meaning,
Gotta go my wrists are bleeding,


Scheme ABCDEFGHIJKJLJKMJJGG
Poetic Form Tetractys  (40%)
Etheree  (40%)
Metre 1011101 1101 1101 0111 1011001 1111 11110 1101 1101 1101 111 1111 1011111 1111101 1111 1111 1111111 10111111 111111110 10111110
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 432
Words 93
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 20
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 17
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 330
Words per stanza (avg) 93
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 08, 2023

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