Analysis of One World One God



Don't take your life, or mine please
as you casually stroll with ease
through the world's freedom - hear my pleas.

Unlock your mind and fly,
remove that death, I do impart,
that covers your beating heart,
see the beauty of life's sigh,
the flowers reaching for sky.

See the children who starve, such a sight,
lift up your thoughts and let them soar
towards helping their plight,
there is no need for negativity's might,
show the smile of positive thoughts' roar.

One world, one God above.
Let the heavens sprinkle love.

Suicide bomber, give up the hate in which you drown,
explode yourself into the gift of joy, not sorrow's frown.


Scheme AAA BCCBB DEDDE FF GG
Poetic Form
Metre 1111111 111000111 10110111 011101 01111101 1101101 1010111 0101011 101011101 11110111 011011 1111111 101110011 111101 1010101 101011010111 0101010111111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 615
Words 112
Sentences 7
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 3, 5, 5, 2, 2
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 99
Words per stanza (avg) 22
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Submitted on November 23, 2010

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Ian Sawicki

Ian Sawicki has been writing poetry for over twenty years. He is a Manchester born poet, who has dedicated his life to exploration and composition of poetry. His work reflects the many great influential experiences of his life, the pain, the pleasure combined to create new exciting poetry. If anyone is interested in my books then please visit my lulu storefront. All artwork on these books is by my own hand. http://stores.lulu.com/chasingtheday more…

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