Analysis of Omnifarious Mirth



Desire between two, much ado about desirous nothings
kicked into touch, landing within a singular solar star
lustingly sucking all the heat with the ferocious charm
of their loving and being ejaculated down upon our earth.

Such shell shock was caused from their fall that the mans
eyes of sand turned into mirrors which reflected only her
image and sparked his gender twisting thoughts of being
less the man and his member limped down not whole.

That state of inbetween began the twosomes graceless fall
one in direction of a downward path, towards a livid hell
where all the sky would crumble and fall upon them and
there in the bottom of that deep abyss they would die.

What picture of mans existance with woman gives credence
to this discombobulated and discomforting feeble fable
only heavens hosts know, fore upon this earth, its a rule
men and women have only argument and distrust as reasons for life!


Scheme XXXX XXXX XXXX XXXX
Poetic Form
Metre 0100111010101010 101110010100101 110101100101 11100101101101 11111111101 111101101010100 1001110101110 10101101111 11110101101 1001010101010101 1101110010110 1001011101111 110111110110 1101000011010 10101110111101 101011010000111011
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 893
Words 157
Sentences 4
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 46
Words per line (avg) 10
Letters per stanza (avg) 186
Words per stanza (avg) 39
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Michael Walker

61, Midwest USA, Veteran, ex-cop, writer (got a BA in film to be a better writer for the industry), poet, lyricist, just finished a sci-fi novella, working on a horror novella, waiting until after the November elections to do the final edit on a non-fiction book that's anti-politics and anti IRS - currently 444 pages. Did numerous positions with Live TV working with the Big 10 and ESPN - always liked Camera #4 position, right on the field with the action up close and personal. Soon to be a great grandfather. Damn... more…

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