Analysis of Oh How I Wish For Tomorrow




Into the day.......
I bleed for death and pray for forgiveness
But I find only pain and sorrow
Oh how I wish for tomorrow

The summer's day feels like winter
Cold and deadly to those who live it alone
It is not by force but by choice
That I refuse to return home

I have no dreams of the future
Only memories of the past
And they fill my days with only pain and sorrow
Oh how I wish for tomorrow

I shall die with you in my heart
But not by my side
For I refuse to let you watch
Your love die


Scheme xxaA bxxx bxaA xxxx
Poetic Form
Metre 0101 1111011010 111101010 1111101 01011110 10101111101 11111111 11011011 11111010 10100101 011111101010 1111101 11111011 11111 11011111 111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 474
Words 104
Sentences 2
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 95
Words per stanza (avg) 26
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Submitted on September 03, 2012

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Jymmy Creasy

I'm a working class skin, who has no faith in the future of the world. It's only downhill from here. I pray every night for the end and wake up every morning happier than the day before. In the chaos of my life I have found peace in my own sadness. All I have are the clothes on my back and the shoes on my feet and I love it that way... I'm not a rich man and never will be not because it's out of reach but because I hate money and greedy people... Everything I have ever have or will have I will end up giving away. "And call a man a fool, If for wealth he doesn't strive? Well then, Mr, you're a better man than I," more…

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