Analysis of Ocean's Fairness



Sitting lonely on the reef
She was recalling by-gone moments in brief
Some touching, some aching, some chief
Some delightful, some shrouded by grief

She was staring at the ocean
However, inside of her, restless with passion
The ocean before her, calm and tranquil
But her surging emotions on the anvil

How many suns rose and how many set
Sometimes sentimental support, at times emotional upset
In the world of cozy hug and snug embrace
At the horizon the sky poured grace

The wind blew comforting whistles
It heralded arrival of hopeful vessels
Up above in the sky, a flock of sea gulls flying
At their smooth flight, she was gazing

She was caught up in emotional interlace
However demure ocean was her guiding ace
Kissing the breeze, she fondled loneliness
She could fathom depth of ocean's fairness


Scheme AAAA BBCC DDEE FFGG EEHH
Poetic Form Quatrain 
Metre 1010101 11010111001 11011011 101011011 11101010 10011010110 0100101010 10100101010 1101101101 010100111010001 00111010101 100100111 01110010 110001011010 1010010111110 11111110 11110010001 10011010101 1001110100 1110111010
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 797
Words 140
Sentences 1
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 33
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 130
Words per stanza (avg) 28
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Submitted on May 08, 2015

Modified on March 23, 2023

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