Analysis of Notes On Sunshine



Just as I came up the rise of a hill,
When all of the earth in the morning was still,
I saw in the sky, far above, gaily dancing,
A whole staff of musical notes advancing.
Giant sixteenth notes and eighth notes allied,
Whole notes and quarters and halves side by side.

And silent! Like vibrant balloons, every one
Came floating, serene, like a miniature sun
That shines through a clear globe, appearing to sight
Like a bubble that’s blown by a child for delight.
And just like those sun-globes, with dawn in the skies,
Balloon-notes came drifting up over the rise.

And not far behind them, some moments or so,
Came something that echoed their gay to and fro.
As lightning is followed by thunder in storms,
So musical sounds trailed these musical forms.
And if all the globes shone just like rainbows in flight,
Then the sound of their song was the sound of sunlight.

So, engulfed in real sunshine, I stood there entranced
While the notes to the music so merrily danced.
I took in the music, the dancing, the sun,
Till finally the music and dancing were done,
That is, till the whole host went bubbling along
To welcome the new day with sunshine and song.

And as I continue to make my ascent
I’ll smile and remember the time that I spent,
And take in the joy that the earth has to give
Like a tree in the earth takes in water to live.
For our one supreme purpose in life is, I’d guess,
To hold on to those times when existence says, “Yes”.


Scheme AABBCC DDEEFF GGHHEE IIDDJJ KKXXLL
Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 1111101101 11101001011 110011011010 01111001010 1001101101 1101001111 010110011001 11001101001 11101101011 101011101101 01111111001 01111011001 01101111011 11011011101 11011011001 11001111001 01101111101 10111110111 10101111101 101101011001 11001001001 110001001001 111011110001 1100111101 01101011101 11001001111 01001101111 101001101011 1101011001111 111111101011
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 1,419
Words 269
Sentences 12
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 6, 6, 6, 6, 6
Lines Amount 30
Letters per line (avg) 37
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 225
Words per stanza (avg) 54
Font size:
 

Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

1:20 min read
3

Stephen Colley

If you review one of my poems, or have anything else to ask or tell me, please leave a note in my Mailbox, which I check daily. more…

All Stephen Colley poems | Stephen Colley Books

0 fans

Discuss this Stephen Colley poem analysis with the community:

0 Comments

    Citation

    Use the citation below to add this poem analysis to your bibliography:

    Style:MLAChicagoAPA

    "Notes On Sunshine" Poetry.com. STANDS4 LLC, 2024. Web. 28 Apr. 2024. <https://www.poetry.com/poem-analysis/80476/notes-on-sunshine>.

    Become a member!

    Join our community of poets and poetry lovers to share your work and offer feedback and encouragement to writers all over the world!

    April 2024

    Poetry Contest

    Join our monthly contest for an opportunity to win cash prizes and attain global acclaim for your talent.
    2
    days
    9
    hours
    31
    minutes

    Special Program

    Earn Rewards!

    Unlock exciting rewards such as a free mug and free contest pass by commenting on fellow members' poems today!

    Browse Poetry.com

    Quiz

    Are you a poetry master?

    »
    "It was many and many a year ago, In a kingdom by the sea."
    A Edmund Spenser
    B Shel Silverstein
    C W.B. Yeats
    D Edgar Allan Poe