Analysis of No Peace Of Mind



Girl I can't take the pain any more you're bringing me down
And girl I'm not really sure if I can handle you being around
Girl you took my heart and ripped it apart it will never be the same
Right from the start I gave you my heart then you left me in pain
Once again this whiskey bottle is my only friend
If you could see what you're doing to me I got to let it end
I do another shot and give it all I got to forget our time
Once again I'm wasted and blind and still i can't find no peace of mind
So if you ever cared about me just let me be alone with my whiskey
I'm tired of the pain I'm going insane just let me be free
Girl you're bringing me down where I can't be found let the whiskey do me in
Let the whiskey in my veins take away this pain and let this life end


Scheme ABCDEEFGHHIE
Poetic Form
Metre 11110110111011 01111011111011001 11111011011110101 110111111111101 1011101011101 1111111011111111 110101011111101101 10111001011111111 1111010111111011110 1101011100111111 111011111111010110 10100111011101111
Closest metre Iambic octameter
Characters 759
Words 167
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 12
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 50
Words per line (avg) 14
Letters per stanza (avg) 594
Words per stanza (avg) 167
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Submitted on August 20, 2014

Modified on March 05, 2023

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David Stephens

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