Analysis of My Vows

Timothy Lamar McKinley 1958 (Birmingham AL)



You have the touch of an angel,
You have the eyes of a dove,
I am enthralled by your beauty,
I am enslaved by your love.

I am faint for your fervor,
You are sweet to the taste,
I long for your splendor,
My darling, make haste.

All I have,
I give to you,
Wishing I were younger,
And saying I do.


Scheme XAXA BCBC XDBD
Poetic Form Quatrain 
Metre 11011110 1101101 11011110 1101111 1111110 111101 111110 11011 111 1111 101010 01011
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 283
Words 62
Sentences 3
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 73
Words per stanza (avg) 21
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Submitted on May 02, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Timothy Lamar McKinley

Born: April 1958 Married: Once Divorced: Once Children: 2 Retired Military more…

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