Analysis of Mi Musa Triste

Delmira Agustini 1886 (Montevideo) – 1914 (Montevideo)



Vagos preludios. En la noche espléndida
Su voz de perlas una fuente calla,
Cuelgan las brisas sus celestes pifanos
En el follaje. Las cabezas pardas
De los búhos acechan.
Las flores se abren más, como asombradas.
Los cisnes de marfil tienden los cuellos
En las lagunas pálidas.
Selene mira del azul. Las frondas
Tiemblan... y todo! hasta el silencio, calla...

Es que ella pasa con su boca triste
Y el gran misterio de sus ojos de ámbar,
A través de la noche, hacia el olvido,
Como una estrella fugitiva y blanca.
Como una destronada reina exótica
De bellos gestos y palabras raras.

Horizontes violados sus ojeras
Dentro sus ojos–dos estrellas de ámbar–
Se abren cansados y húmedos y tristes
Como llagas de luz que quejaran.

Es un dolor que vive y que no espera,
Es una aurora gris que se levanta
Del gran lecho de sombras de la noche,
Cansada ya, sin esplendor, sin ansias
Y sus canciones son como hadas tristes
Alhajadas de lágrimas...

Murmuring preludes. On this resplendent night
Her pearled voice quiets a fountain.
The breezes hang their celestial fifes
In the foliage. The gray heads
Of the owls keep watch.
Flowers open themselves, as if surprised.
Ivory swans extend their necks
In the pallid lakes.
Selene watches from the blue. Fronds
Tremble...and everything! Even the silence, quiets.

She wanders with her sad mouth
And the grand mystery of amber eyes,
Across the night, toward forgetfulness
Like a star, fugitive and white.
Like a dethroned exotic queen
With comely gestures and rare utterings.

Her undereyes are violated horizons
And her irises–two stars of amber–
Open wet and weary and sad
Like ulcers of light that weep.

She is a grief which thrives and does not hope,
She is a gray aurora rising
From the shadowy bed of night,
Exhausted, without splendor, without anxiousness.
And her songs are like dolorous fairies
Jeweled in teardrops...

The strings of lyres
                          Are the souls' fibers.–

The blood of bitter vineyards, noble vineyards,
In goblets of regal beauty, rises
To her marble hands, to lips carved
Like the blazon of a great lineage.

Strange Princes of Fantasy! They
Have seen her languid head, once erect,
And heard her laugh, for her eyes
Tremble with the flower of aristocracies!

And her soul clean as fire, like a star,
Burns in those pupils of amber.
But with a mere glance, scarcely an intimacy,
Perhaps the echo of a profane voice,
This white and pristine soul shrinks
Like a luminous flower, folding herself up!


Scheme ABCCDCCCCB AEABFC CECD EAGCCC ADCCGACCCC XCCADC CEAX XFACCC CC CCAX XACC EECCCX
Poetic Form
Metre 1111111 111110110 111111 11110101 11111 111111101 1111111 1101011 01101111 111101110 1110111101 111111111 011111111 1010101110 1010101011 111111 1111 1111111 11111111 1011111 111111111 1100101111 11111111 111111 11111011 1111 1001110101 01110010 010110101 0010011 10111 1010011101 10010111 00101 01101011 1101001010 1101011 0011001101 0101011 10110001 10010101 11010011 0111000010 0010011110 10101001 1101111 1101110111 110101010 10100111 0100110011 00111110 101 0111 10110 01110101010 011101010 10101111 101101100 11011001 110101101 0101101 10101011 0011110101 10110110 110111011000 0101010011 1101011 101001010011
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 2,553
Words 425
Sentences 35
Stanzas 12
Stanza Lengths 10, 6, 4, 6, 10, 6, 4, 6, 2, 4, 4, 6
Lines Amount 68
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 161
Words per stanza (avg) 35
Font size:
 

Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

2:07 min read
130

Delmira Agustini

Delmira Agustini, a Uruguayan poet, is considered one of the greatest female Latin American poets of the early 20th century. more…

All Delmira Agustini poems | Delmira Agustini Books

0 fans

Discuss this Delmira Agustini poem analysis with the community:

0 Comments

    Citation

    Use the citation below to add this poem analysis to your bibliography:

    Style:MLAChicagoAPA

    "Mi Musa Triste" Poetry.com. STANDS4 LLC, 2024. Web. 1 May 2024. <https://www.poetry.com/poem-analysis/7955/mi-musa-triste>.

    Become a member!

    Join our community of poets and poetry lovers to share your work and offer feedback and encouragement to writers all over the world!

    May 2024

    Poetry Contest

    Join our monthly contest for an opportunity to win cash prizes and attain global acclaim for your talent.
    30
    days
    16
    hours
    15
    minutes

    Special Program

    Earn Rewards!

    Unlock exciting rewards such as a free mug and free contest pass by commenting on fellow members' poems today!

    Browse Poetry.com

    Quiz

    Are you a poetry master?

    »
    I wandered lonely as a _______ that floats on high o'er vales and hills
    A star
    B bird
    C cloud
    D flower