Analysis of My First Cry



His two cracked ribs (sustained from a fall
Off a horse in the Mohave Desert) hurt like hell,
But "comfort zone" was in his "do-or-die" resolve--
To break the never crossed barrier. In his Bell XS-1,
High above the earth (at 42,00 ft.),
Heaven came down--with a jolt in his ninth...
A Mach 1.06, or 700 miles per hour,
Beating the last failed attempt...
A Mach 0.94. And, he was thunderstruck--big time!
Because for the very first time--in all human history,
He flew faster than the speed of sound,
Flying--as he put it, "smooth as a baby's bottom."

The world heard, for the very first time--a sonic boom.
And--my Nanay and Tatay...
My first cry.

And after a score and seven years,
After that first cry, I found myself...
Crying a river--flying 10,000 miles away. ...

For making 'the day' of my coming..."historic and
Unforgettable," albeit, by happenstance...
My parents thank you, my children
(I hope) thank you, and I thank you!


Scheme XXXABXXBXXBX XBX AXX BAXX
Poetic Form
Metre 111101101 10100110111 110110111101 1101011000111 1010111 1011101011 0111110 1001101 010111011 011010110110100 111010111 1011111101010 0111010110101 01101 111 010010101 10111111 1001010101 110011110 0100010110 11011110 11110111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 910
Words 169
Sentences 18
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 12, 3, 3, 4
Lines Amount 22
Letters per line (avg) 31
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 171
Words per stanza (avg) 41
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Submitted on May 02, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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