Analysis of Lovers



Two lil lovers
named Jody and Hay
went for a walk
on a summers day

Holding hands
walking free
then Jody decides
to get down on one knee

"I love you Hay
your the best thing to me
i wanna be your man
for eternity"

Hay is ecstatic
So she screams with joy
for jody is
her favourite boy

"I love you too"
she says with a smile
"I know we'll be together
for a long long while"


Scheme XAXA XBXB ABXB XCXC XDXD
Poetic Form Quatrain 
Metre 1110 11001 1101 10101 101 101 1101 111111 1111 101111 110111 10100 11010 11111 1101 011 1111 11101 1111010 10111
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 350
Words 78
Sentences 1
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 14
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 57
Words per stanza (avg) 16
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Submitted on November 24, 2009

Modified on March 15, 2023

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