Analysis of Love Poem



I do not dream of you;
you do not lend yourself to rhetoric
but move in calligraphic paths
untraceable with words.

I dream of small gray birds
with dark-streaked wings cupped in my hands;
I fling them out to fly,
soft cries and feather-thin,
beating arcs into the air,
leaving barbs and thorns caught in my fingers.
I move between the pain of touch and joy of sight:
the etching of those bodies on the sky.

I do not dream of you
but of the mysteries you hold me in,
in feathers, winds, and wizardry,
yet if I spoke
my voice would gleam in hard, bright fragments
you could not hope to catch or comprehend.


Scheme Axxb bxcdxxxc Adxxxx
Poetic Form
Metre 111111 1111011100 1100101 010011 111111 11111011 111111 110101 1010101 1010110110 110101110111 0101110101 111111 1101001110 01010100 1111 111101110 111111101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 587
Words 115
Sentences 4
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 8, 6
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 158
Words per stanza (avg) 38
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Submitted on May 02, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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