Analysis of long day



dismantle in layers the edge
round the corners
of another day
orchestra of a million bugs
ask the sun to lay down his head
a second gone forever
tomorrow will forget today
her memory getting worse
as time soars
second after second
ticking it's warning
like a hidden bomb
one day closer to dust
and the immortal soul


Scheme ABCDEFCGHIJKLM
Poetic Form
Metre 01001001 1010 10101 10010101 10111111 0101010 0110101 0100101 111 101010 10110 10101 111011 000101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 302
Words 58
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 14
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 257
Words per stanza (avg) 58
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Submitted on May 02, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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