Analysis of Lonely as the Sun



Here I stand alone, proudly as the morning
Sun,
With the weight of love to carry, a load that
Weighs a ton.
I give up on the day, for t'is the moon that
Brings me dreams,
And a photo of you is in my mind, flowing
Like a gentle stream.

Fortune favors the nightly moon, with the
Stars by its side,
But I am the sun, when I rise the nighttime
Dies.
And so your love has been set free, to
Return another night,
And all the love you give to me, feels so
Splendidly right.


Scheme ABCBCXAX XXXXXDXD
Poetic Form
Metre 11101101010 1 10111110011 101 111101111011 111 00111101110 10101 1010010110 1111 1110111101 1 011111111 010101 0101111111 1001
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 451
Words 96
Sentences 4
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 8, 8
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 177
Words per stanza (avg) 48
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Submitted on October 07, 2013

Modified on April 17, 2023

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Mark William Scott

Well I'm an amateur poet hoping to share some of the work I've written. My favourite style would have to be more of a 19th century twist, particularly on the subjects of love and loss. So please read and review my work. more…

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