Analysis of Like Starfall



Look me in my shining eyes;
I have no fear, nor weak regrets.
The remnants of them washed away
last night beneath the silken canopy of the trees
swishing
like a woman's bustling verdant dress
under the raw, cracked lips of the wind.
The wind whispered to me, then, eerily close
slightly warm
but edged with sharp pinpricks of ice
that hardened me
to everything
and in the purity of solitude
I found a unique, floating happiness
the kind that lifts your feet off the ground
cold
bony
mere human bundles of skin and blood
but somehow recognized
by the force that is space, and the force
that is hopeful, dawning love.
I saw a light that night
caressed by breezes and losing the fight
against the great, wet, pulsing earth
that was never fighting until my birth
when I thought
three years old, pudgy, untainted
that there was something I needed to do.
But there never was
and here I am, now
buffeted by salty sea winds that have always been my friends
in love with my own heady soul
living like starfall in the night.
Always flying onward
until someone turns off the light.


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Poetic Form Tetractys  (23%)
Metre 1101101 11111101 01011101 1101010100101 1 1010100101 100111101 01101111001 101 1111111 1101 110 000100110 1100110100 011111101 1 10 110101101 1110 101111001 1110101 110111 0111001001 01011101 1110100111 111 11110010 1111011011 11101 01111 0111011111111 01111101 1011001 11010 0111101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,036
Words 196
Sentences 6
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 35
Lines Amount 35
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 855
Words per stanza (avg) 196
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Joelle Nanula

Hey guys!My name is Joelle, and I am an eighth-grader living in Southern California. I have multiple interests, including music, linguistics, and writing, but poetry is by far my favorite. I have been frustrated for a long time by my inability to achieve anything in the poetry realm; I'm one of those teens that has a billion goals but doesn't have the work ethic to reach them; so I'm hoping some of my poems will be found here. As for my flaws, I'm terrible at sports, math is my abhorrence, and I wouldn't be able to tell Japan from Africa on a map. (Aka, I'm horrific at geography and navigation.) Thanks so much for reading! Love ya! Also, if Nick Jonas ever reads this, you're the coolest and most self-actualized person on Earth!Notes About My Poetry:1. "Traces" and "Wandering Hearts" are by far the best poems in my collection thingy, so read 'em!2. There are a bunch of short, meaningless poems here too, so skip past them until you reach the good ones.3. I did take some leaps in posting my more private poems here. Please be sensitive.4. "Always a Choice" is dedicated to all the girls out there who are feeling insecure, or have daunting things going on in their lives right now. I know a couple of people who inspired this poem, and I hope they will understand its meaning and find the courage to carry on.5. I am going to be frequently updating this page, but since only fifteen poems can remain here at a time, I have chosen "Always a Choice," "These Sunsets," "One Memory," "Girl With The Blue Barrette," "Traces," "Wandering Hearts," "What Is Life?," "Forces Within," "The Test of Time," "Snapshots," and "Another's Skin" to be my eleven permanent poems. Therefore, the other four will always be rotating. Gracias!New Additions: - "One," which recently replaced "Flying Away," is about the deep, spiritual way in which every living creature is connected, no matter how removed from one another we may seem.- "Like Starfall" makes absolutely zero sense; don't worry, I'm not dumb. It's just an outpouring of thoughts, and mostly, the emotion you get when sitting alone under the stars and breathing in the clear, cool, delicious air, and you feel like your stomach is flying, and you almost start to cry a little bit because the night is so unnaturally beautiful. You know what I'm saying? Yeah I know, it's a totally weird poem. I'm not gonna leave it up here for very long.- "The Painter" is sort of a deep-ish poem about how, even when rejected by the rest of the world, a person can be happy. Such is the case with the painter, who is ultimately either very old or mentally impaired, but is still content to sit in his yard and paint despite what others think. more…

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