Analysis of Like an Image



Sitting on the shore of an ocean
Busy in counting receding waves
I think about the days to run
Throwing water on each other paves

Building castles of love with sand
And then demolishing as a fun
Enthralled in love not on land
Under scorching heat of hot sun

Then you left me in disgust in pain
And selected my rival just to tease
Now when I come on shore in rain
Life becomes curse not to please

I see your image on the water
Which vanishes like an image
Love becomes beauty's martyr
And remains on stage as a page

Col Muhammad Khalid Khan
Copyright 2015 Golden Glow


Scheme ABAB CACA DEDE FXFX XX
Poetic Form
Metre 101011110 100100101 11010111 101011101 10101111 010100101 0101111 10101111 111100101 0010110111 11111101 1011111 111101010 11001110 101110 00111101 1010101 10101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 549
Words 109
Sentences 1
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 2
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 91
Words per stanza (avg) 22
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Submitted on July 04, 2015

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Muhammad Khalid Khan

Colonel Muhammad Khalid Khan lives in Abbottabad Pakistan.His pen name is Mehr which means Love and Sun in Urdu and Persian. He did his F.Sc and B.A from Government Post Graduate College Abbottabad afterwards he did his Masters in English Language and Literature, LLB, Masters in Educational Administration from University of the Punjab Lahore, he also did Masters in TEFL (Applied Linguistics) and Diploma in TEIL (Teaching English as an International Language)under the auspices of British Council and American Centre, he started his career as lawyer and then got commission in PAKISTAN ARMY as an English Instructor where he served for 27 years. He is a poet and writer. As an editor his appreciable work is Pakistan Army Journal, Pakistan Defence Review, Army Green Book and The Rising Crescent...,His Seven books are already published namely Pa be-Gill (Urdu Poetry), Anap Shanap (Urdu Humorous Poetry), Feelings (English Poetry), Gulab Rehnay Day (Urdu Poetry), Chains of Life (English Poetry), Raflian (Hindko Poetry) and Khaki Lafafa (Urdu Prose).His two latest books one in English Poetry Golden Glow and the other in Pushto Poetry Da Meenay Dastak have been published recently.His two books of Urdu Poetry Aks Dar Aks and Ant Shant are under publication.His email address is khalidk1558@gmail.com.His published books can be seen and read on his website,mehrpoetry.com as well as on his page on facebook. more…

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