Analysis of Land Unseen...



I watch as the morning sun
 climbs up the back of the mountains,
 to light the day,
remembering days of past,
waking where I lay.

Hung over with no money in my pocket because of the night before,
living hand & hand with evil,
 trying to even the score.

Now those days are gone,
Ive said to hell with all of the worlds wrong.

If it wasnt for all of the hate & debate,
I wouldnt have known Jesus' fate.

Now its ours at hand,
unseen in this land...


Scheme XXAXA BXB XX CC DD
Poetic Form
Metre 1110101 11011010 1101 0100111 10111 110111001100110101 1011110 1011001 11111 1111111011 1111110101 1111101 111011 01011
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 432
Words 89
Sentences 5
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 5, 3, 2, 2, 2
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 67
Words per stanza (avg) 18
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Submitted on April 14, 2015

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Donald Vess

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