Analysis of Just good!!!!



When I sometimes
Go little awry
With pain
I am little sorry
I lay down straight
Breath oxygen
Push into brain
That relieves me of pain
I lift my face
With refilled grace
Happiness comes through contentment
Greedy has in his pocket only resentment
Money gives us power
To go on buying spree
Joyce and rejoice to a degree
Happiness is not slave of money
It is patience's sweet honey
If you are dressed white collar
Full of pocket with dollar
It may be a day of great laughter
But happiness still remains a waiter
If you think life is that much all
Then you are nothing but a doll
Pain and sorrows are soul's food
Earthly possessions are just good………


Scheme ABCDEFCCGGHHIDDDDIIIIJKLM
Poetic Form Tetractys  (32%)
Metre 1101 11001 11 111010 1111 1100 1011 101111 1111 1011 10011010 101011010010 101110 111101 10011001 100111110 111110 1111110 1110110 111011110 1100101010 11111111 11110101 1010111 10010111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 629
Words 121
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 25
Lines Amount 25
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 522
Words per stanza (avg) 121
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Submitted on October 15, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

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