Analysis of In my Shoes



Every morning when I wake,
I feel like I'm about to break,
dreading to take on another day,
feeling like I am in the way.

I have always felt unaccepted in the world,
treated like nothing but the different girl.
My path feels like an obstacle course,
like my fate is being taken by force.

Sometimes I just want to give up,
because nothing I do seems good enough.
I am surrounded by ridicule and hate,
which has caused my miserable state.

If only people would understand,
and reach out with a helping hand.
Instead they look at me as if they're blind,
rejecting and leaving me behind.

I have been battered and torn down,
humiliated, heartbroken, and tossed around.
If I had the opportunity I would choose,
for the world to live a day in my shoes.


Scheme AABB XXCC XXDD EEFF XXGG
Poetic Form Quatrain  (40%)
Etheree  (25%)
Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 10010111 11110111 101110101 10111001 11111001 10110101001 111111001 1111101011 01111111 0110111101 1101011001 111110001 11010101 01110101 0111111111 010010101 11110011 0100100101 11100100111 1011101011
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 725
Words 138
Sentences 10
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 117
Words per stanza (avg) 28
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Submitted on June 19, 2015

Modified on March 05, 2023

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