Analysis of if I do what you do do we make it better?



if I do what you do
 do we make it better?
 or
 if I don't do what you do
 do we make it worse?

if I think what you think
 do we make it clever?
 or
 if I don't think what you think
 do we make it never?

if I say what you say
 do we make it stronger?
 or
 if I don't say what you say
 do we make it forever?

by Ismet Özce


Scheme abCad ebCeb fbCfb d
Poetic Form
Metre 111111 111110 1 1111111 11111 111111 111110 1 1111111 111110 111111 111110 1 1111111 1111010 111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 310
Words 75
Sentences 7
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 5, 5, 5, 1
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 14
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 56
Words per stanza (avg) 19
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Submitted on February 21, 2017

Modified on March 05, 2023

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