Analysis of I'm still waiting for your call



It's been more than a day you didn't call,
I don't know if I did something wrong,
Here I am standing all alone,
“Another day without you” I hate this song,
Is this the way love goes or I have to wait for so long,
Either way I'm the looser waiting in the desert for the rain to fall,

You are busy in everything you do but I don't know how?
Life isn't the paradise I used know,
Simply pick-up the phone and say how are you my love,
That's enough for this aching heart,
Send me a SMS about how you feel and make me smart,
If you have forgotten that my head is full of puzzles to solve.


Scheme ABXBBA XXXCCX
Poetic Form
Metre 1111011101 111111101 11110101 01010111111 11011111111111 101101010001010111 11100101111111 110010111 1011010111111 10111101 1101011110111 1110101111111011
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 575
Words 120
Sentences 2
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 6, 6
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 37
Words per line (avg) 10
Letters per stanza (avg) 221
Words per stanza (avg) 60
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Submitted on July 24, 2017

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Mohamed Fazloon

My Personal profile:I belong to a gem merchant family. I began writing poetry since I was in my fifth grade. I completed my London Ordinary level and London Advanced level in 1998. I also completed my diploma in business management and I finally attained my Bachelors degree B.com in marketing - U.S.A - 2009.My Achievements:1) Won the Editors choice award from International Library of Poetry UK -1997.2) Member of the International society of poets.3) Won many awards at school for best poetry writing - 1995-1998.4) Many poems been published in local newspapers and magazines - 1995-2000. 5) Most valuable poet - poetry.com - 20126) Poet Laureate - Poetry.com - 20127) Legendary Poet - Poetry.com -2012 more…

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