Analysis of Hope for better!!!



“Better luck next time”
This life went without sublime
“Better safe than sorry”
Life will be consumed
Even without glory
“Don't tense your head”
It is still to be
“Better off dead”
If you can not
“better yourself”
Live on what is there in the shelf
If you are in glum and glee
“Chose between the devil and deep blue sea”
If your life has no fun
Think of
“Better off in long run”
Everyone is blessed with something
It is better than nothing
“Read between the lines”
Never sprain your spines
Consolation is “aid to content”
Just go “for the kill”
Never repent
“Die hard” to bring disdain
Just forget every pain
The road has only one end
No might can get it bent
One day activities will suspend
For every one, there is one end…………..


Scheme AABCBDBDEFFBBGHGIIJJKLKMMNKNN
Poetic Form
Metre 10111 1110101 101110 11101 100110 1111 11111 1011 1111 1001 11111001 1110101 1010100111 111111 11 101011 1011110 1110110 10101 10111 01011110 11101 1001 111101 1011001 0111011 111111 110100101 110011111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 753
Words 137
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 29
Lines Amount 29
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 563
Words per stanza (avg) 137
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Submitted on September 02, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

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