Analysis of holy days



my all the days are precious

but my fasting observing days are the best ones

i pay my needy innocent people

nothing at least pleasure

of more worth than money

my these days with a beautiful routine

going to make me more disciplined

more obedient and lenient towards my aim

a light of hope and optimism

these are not just confined to words but in real

i shall miss these days as holy month is going to be end

my sehri(breakfast) and aftari (dinners)

along with my jolly dear ones

i am gona miss .....you all...


Scheme X A X X X X X X X X X X A X
Poetic Form
Metre 1101110 111001011011 1111010010 101110 111110 1111010001 101111100 1010001000111 01110100 11110111101 111111101110111 11100110 01111011 111111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 496
Words 96
Sentences 2
Stanzas 14
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 29
Words per stanza (avg) 7
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Submitted on August 10, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

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