Analysis of Help Me I'm Fine



HELP ME I’M FINE

Hapless life like the wilting leaF
Empty, numb, oppressive ennuI
Lonely heart so deeply brokeN
Pernicious words asphyxiate mE

Mortified, abandoned, arrivedercI
 Eroding spirit deaths silent alarM

Haunting thoughts to harm myself
Euthanasia “relief” roped esophagI
 Last breath… fleet divine envisioN
Pristine grace, exuberant, exquisitE
Wait!! Wait!!
Memories of love laughter symmetrI
Expel the evil that steals thy dreaM
 Too late for me


Scheme X XABA XX XXBXXXXA
Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 1111 10110101 101010010 10111010 01010101 100101 0101011001 101111 0100111 11101010 1010100100 11 10011101 010101111 1111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 450
Words 67
Sentences 3
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 1, 4, 2, 8
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 93
Words per stanza (avg) 17
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Submitted on October 26, 2016

Modified on March 05, 2023

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