Analysis of Heaven's Kiss Lives Near



Lay your hands still
Unclench your fingers
Let them rest turned upwards.
Now suppose all dangers real.

With your eyes closed
Hide your mind's fears
Let no danger lurk there.
You are clearing the road.
Motion wide with your arms
Securing a kiss by you
On your fingertips which holds
Every grace you want and give.
Let it go now, send it out
Knowing others do the same
Building roads risen without
Any apparent support or reign.
When you are feeling no one
Is there or cares or comes
We are here by the multitudes
With extended arms and hugs.


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Poetic Form Etheree  (20%)
Metre 1111 1110 111110 1011101 1111 1111 111011 111001 101111 0100111 111011 10011101 1111111 1010101 1011001 100100111 1111011 111111 1111010 1010101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 521
Words 100
Sentences 7
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 4, 16
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 216
Words per stanza (avg) 50
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Submitted on June 09, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

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