Analysis of he lies with me



when he lies with me, at that time
i dont know the truth so i totally
belive his words.............
when i know the truth at that time
my heart break up into the pieces
so i cant control my emotion i really
hate liears.................................
but i pray to god forgive theirs mistakes
they dont know what they are doing.....


Scheme ABCADBCEF
Poetic Form Nonet (22%)
Metre 11111111 1110111100 111 11101111 111101010 111011010110 11 1111101101 11111110
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 325
Words 59
Sentences 3
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 9
Lines Amount 9
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 223
Words per stanza (avg) 59
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Submitted on July 09, 2012

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Vasudha Pulukuri

im vasudhasudhakar.pulukuri and im studying final year b-tech in computer science engineering i born in andrapradesh my date of birth is 18-08-1989 and my dad name:p.sudhakarsadhu and i like singing but up to now i dont participate in any audition so, really i like to write poems and storys really i love this poetry.com because im really expressing my thougts and views by this poetry.com.and i know only two languages one is telugu and another one is english... more…

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