Analysis of Hanging hour



by satya pattnaik

They hanged and buried
The omen tonight
Secretly in a footless hour
Painting a dense layer
 Of darkness over it
Streetlights dimed
Traffic square deserted
Emptiness ruled through out
Everything got standstill
However, acall that was heard in the dead silence
With flapping wings of victory
This was weightless
On the shoulder of time
With the hanging history
Only evil little we crushed for
Appeasing our mind trickily
Deceiving our thoughts painfully
Hanging body was not our triumph
In addition, it was not the answer of barbaric act
Only we played the game of bluff
To celebrate the sudden hatred of mass
A beguile was blown
An obscene hour melted in dark
Blood stained washed out
From the face of stunned history
And hanging ghost of yesterday night
Became news
In every one's morning coffee bite
With channel, papers and snacks
We amused without dreaming danger
But my courtyard sun grow cold
Words of newspaper blurred
When I witnessed the perched white dove
Of the mango groove
Numbed by bursting sounds of crows
Who by scratching the god's hour
Snatched the yell of triumph
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Poetic Form
Metre 1101 11010 01001 10000110 100110 110101 11 101010 100111 1011 10111100110 11011100 1110 101011 1010100 101010111 0101011 010101100 1010111010 001011101010101 10110111 1100101011 00111 101101001 1111 10111100 01011101 011 0100110101 1101001 101011010 111111 11101 11100111 10101 1110111 11100110 101110 10
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,115
Words 191
Sentences 3
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 1, 38
Lines Amount 39
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 461
Words per stanza (avg) 95
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Submitted on February 02, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

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