Analysis of Haiku time



Fascist water(464)
 Mitford was white
 On tap at the eagle´s
 her stubborn heart

Corruption(464)
 Corrupt get rich
 Selling future progress
 Rich poverty

Gossip
 Words find lost lips
 Lucky hearsay dip´s speak
 Behind back quips peak.

Truth
 I had the truth
 curved it almost snapped it
 shaping a lie

Lie
 I had a lie
 Bent it almost broke it
 Shaping the truth

Lecture(575)
 Numb bum and sprained brain
 Ears are lent and notes are scribbled
 Synapses quibble

Confession
 Now speak in the box
 Guilt butterflies in a cage
 Cocoon cut exposed

p*rn
 All over her face
 Sigh, moan, whinge, murmur, scream, wheeze
 Creme, smile for the cam.


Scheme AXBX CXBX XXDD EEFG GGFE AXXX CXXX CXXX
Poetic Form
Metre 1010 111 1110101 0101 010 0111 10101 1100 10 1111 101111 01111 1 1101 11111 1001 1 1101 11111 1001 10 11011 11101110 10010 010 11001 110001 01101 11 11001 1111011 11101
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 626
Words 108
Sentences 2
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 32
Letters per line (avg) 16
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 63
Words per stanza (avg) 13
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Submitted on April 16, 2015

Modified on April 10, 2023

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Simon Elliott

Throughapoetseye.blogspot.comSimon Bernard Elliott.International poetry.It´s about creativity and real expression.I am a traveller, I´ve lived all over the world. Always in close proximity to nature and poetry. I´ve written since I was sixteen now I am 31. I aim to open people´s eyes with my poetry. I aim to entertain and also to provoke reactions. If I can do any of these things- I think the hours spent writing will all be worth it. more…

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