Analysis of Grey and dim...



I am trying to tell you
My grief from real within
How this blue sky looks grey and dim
I saw real spring once in blue moon
At once I played sweet sombre tune
Trees look frozen and garden without trim
How this blue sky looks grey and dim...
Stars were floating once in deep  waters
Birds also kept mum..closed all shutters
My body numb and limbs cannot swim..
How this blue sky looks grey and dim..
Please do not pamper me let wind blow
Even if sun around ..it may snow
Hope this time flies..finish my whim..
How this blue sky looks grey and dim...!


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Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 1110111 111101 11111101 11111011 1111111 1110010011 11111101 101010110 11011110 110101101 11111101 111101111 101101111 111111 11111101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 534
Words 108
Sentences 8
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 15
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 423
Words per stanza (avg) 107
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Submitted on July 12, 2014

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Shantanu Chindhade

I am an eye specialist practicing in Pune city for the last 25 yrs or so.Writing poetry in my mother tongue for the last 45 yrs .My two collections are released.English poetry is a new avenue for me and I am trying my best to come out.I write prose as well.I run a group of amateur poets and writers in Pune city for the last 27 yrs just to keep my interest alive in literature and literary world. more…

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