Analysis of For what?

Karolina Marszałkowska 1993 (Gdańsk)



You won't find me on the other side
I hold your warm hands
I'm here , just beside
In heavens your sight ends

Why you wish for Eden?
When  me, you can have
Why look for cures
Am I not good as salve ?

You see only what fate gave
You don't know what was your share
You can't hear my sent sound wave
This fate played this game unfair

Why do you wish for paradise?
When you don't know human glee
I'd be your only merchandise
If you'd loose yourself in me

You can't hear my lips
You want  heaven for your soul
You make a road from silk material
And head to deceptive hole

Why you wish for demise?
You could have had it all
Steps supposed to arise
While  you have nothing more


Scheme AXAX XXXX BCBC XDED XFXF EXEX
Poetic Form Quatrain  (50%)
Metre 111110101 11111 11101 010111 111110 11111 1111 111111 1110111 1111111 1111111 1111101 1111110 1111101 1111010 1110101 11111 1110111 1101110100 0110101 111101 111111 101101 111101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 646
Words 134
Sentences 5
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 86
Words per stanza (avg) 23
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Modified on March 05, 2023

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