Analysis of Fence



I wish I had been born a white picket fence
spotless and clean
with triangle tops pointing cloudward, parallel
to passerbys
A gap between each board shows what lies beyond:
a lush green grass
thick and a bit wild, nurturing not only
grey spiny weeds
but a daffodil or three; souvenir for
each walkerby
My sturdy presence would surround a cream-bricked
home, warm and well
protective abode from the meak, sickly and
stoic as well
And if a passerby cared to glance, he would
catch on the edge
of his eye a figure closing a drape or
a bicycle,
red, that's propped against the brick of a cozy
warm and good home


Scheme ABCADEFGHIDCJCKLHMFN
Poetic Form Tetractys  (45%)
Etheree  (20%)
Metre 11111101101 1001 110110110 11 01011111101 0111 10011100110 1101 101011011 11 11010101011 1101 01001101100 1011 01010011111 1101 11101010011 0100 11101011010 1011
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 588
Words 112
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 20
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 485
Words per stanza (avg) 112
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on April 03, 2023

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