Analysis of Eventual Connections



Kids at play, teeter-tottering,
Writing in the sand,
Playing baseball, hide and seek,
Games of every kind!

Soon they talk; still chat and play,
But odd long walks and sunset lingerings,
Late arrivals, dinner skipped,
Telephone homework at midnight!

Movies will soon enter the fray,
Dimples deep as puddles,
Popcorn, cookies, hot chocolates,
Add a little late night ride, chips and cake!
Coffee?

Off in different directions,
Our thoughts will often turn
To days and years and times gone by
Catalogued by scents!

I think of you at coffee,
Remembrances of your perfume invades,
You are not here yet popcorn, chips, and cakes
Are all consistent reminders.

My nine-year-old writes in the sand,
I sit and reminisce,
A child with flowing hair appears,
Dimples deep as puddles!

The swing chains clink beside me,
The scent of your perfume invades.
You’re here? . . .

c. Poetic Universalisms II by Lena Smith Carter, 2006.


Scheme xaxx bcxx bCcxd cxxc dccc accC dcx x
Poetic Form
Metre 11110100 10001 1011101 111001 1111101 1111011 1010101 10111 10111001 101110 110110 1010111101 10 10100010 1011101 11010111 1011 1111110 0100110101 111111101 11010010 11111001 11001 01110101 101110 0111011 01110101 11 101011110110
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 886
Words 150
Sentences 15
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 5, 4, 4, 4, 3, 1
Lines Amount 29
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 90
Words per stanza (avg) 19
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Lena Smith Carter

Lena Smith Carter is an internationally traveled concert artist who has sung the poetry of the world in seven languages across America and around the world. She is a graduate of Central State University (OH) with a B. S. in Music Education, a graduate of Miami University (OH) with an M.Mus. in Performance and Repertory, and has studied for her doctorate at the Paris American Academy, Paris, France and The Pennsylvania State University, University Park, PA. Her international travels have taken her from Paris to New York as well as Porto Alegre, RS; Fortaleza, CE; Recife, PE; Joao Pessoa, PB: Natal, RN; Sergipe, AR; and Brasilia, DF, where she appeared at Casa Thomas Jefferson /The American Embassy. Her experiences in the northeast allowed her to use many Brazilian folk songs as both the land and the language are very close to the hearts of northeasterners. In the south of Brazil, where there are many foreign-born citizens who speak other languages natively, she used more German, Latin, Italian, French, and Spanish, as well as Portuguese and English.In addition to her concert career and international travels, she is a teacher, parent, grandparent, publisher, editor, patent holder, philosopher and published poet and author. She has traveled to more than 15 different countries and has had more than thirty-five years experience in the creative arts and education. Her poetry is bold, original, colorful, and imaginative.Her written and published works include The Weight Management Diary, Axioms for Life/Work, Axioms for Life I, Axioms for Life II, Axioms for Life III, Poetic Universalisms I (hardback/paperback), Poetic Universalisms II, (hardback/paperback), 50 Reasons Why You Have/Have Not Arrived, Foreign Language Tips for Travelers (eBook), School Security Rewind (eBook), Writing Poetry: How to make yourself a Pro (eBook) and Jumpstarting Your Choir, Volume I. more…

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