Analysis of Empty Space
An empty space
just summoning
will tease my mind
to paint anew
in runic signs
the morning hue.
*
Yet, nothing comes
for me to say
in rhythmic timing
all the while
how to compose
in peerless style.
*
How can I make
my readers heave
with ripping light
withdrawing night
announcing morning
with delight?
*
Oh, that's no reason
to ignore
the nascent longing
to combat
I see inside each
muses's path.
*
Perhaps it's all been
said before,
I say ahead
of an airy nap...
Each word that's caught
like fish in trap
must be set free.
Neli Fatu de Valahia
Toronto City - Summer of 2001
Scheme | XAXBXB XXACXC XXDDAD XEAXXX XEXFXFX XX |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 1101 1100 1111 1101 011 0101 1 1101 1111 01010 101 1101 0101 1 1111 1101 1101 0101 01010 101 1 11110 101 01010 110 11011 11 1 01111 101 1101 11101 1111 1101 1111 1111 01010101 |
Closest metre | Iambic dimeter |
Characters | 537 |
Words | 109 |
Sentences | 7 |
Stanzas | 2 |
Stanza Lengths | 35, 2 |
Lines Amount | 37 |
Letters per line (avg) | 12 |
Words per line (avg) | 3 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 223 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 55 |
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Submitted on March 15, 2011
Modified on March 05, 2023
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