Analysis of Electricity



The smell of earth,
Of dust before rain,
Sky darkening, lightning flashing,
Thunder ominous in distance.

Brown arms enfold me in your odor --
Warm, slightly sweaty;
Strong hands, firm, soft lips
Leave me breathless --
And eyes --

Your eyes -- that strike me dead.


Scheme XXXX XXXXX X
Poetic Form Etheree  (60%)
Tetractys  (40%)
Metre 0111 11011 11001010 10100010 110110110 11010 11111 1110 01 111111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 254
Words 46
Sentences 2
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 5, 1
Lines Amount 10
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 67
Words per stanza (avg) 15
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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L. Larry Amadore

A word lover who enjoys beautiful poetry of all genres and responds with admiration to fresh and felicitous phrases. [Retired manufacturing/production control mgr./marketing manager/financial analyst. USAF veteran; lived in US, Mexico, Germany, Turkey.] more…

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