Analysis of Don’t smoke




It's a fresh air in the morning
I walked into the car
There was a man
That smoked in the corner
It was a cold morning
He warmed his body
With his cigar
But, he burn my lungs
And he damage my brain
He violate my right, to get a clean air
So I said, “I'm sorry sir, but I really care
About my right to get some clean air.”
And he replied, “well excuse me miss,
But I had to warm my body.”
The next day
I heard he was murdered
By Cancer


Scheme ABCDAEBFGHHHIEJKD
Poetic Form
Metre 10110010 110101 1101 110010 110110 11110 1101 11111 011011 11001111011 111110111101 011111111 010110111 11111110 011 111110 110
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 425
Words 96
Sentences 3
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 17
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 326
Words per stanza (avg) 94
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Submitted on June 22, 2016

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Amaiso Nensy

i was born in little city call Cimahi, west java, Indonesia. i enjoy learning languages, listening to music from all over the world. loves many genre of music, from Rock to Hip-Hop.nice to get review from all of you ^^i have other account at http://www.helium.com/users/520464 but i can't access it..i wonder why.. >more…

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