Analysis of Don’t smoke
It's a fresh air in the morning
I walked into the car
There was a man
That smoked in the corner
It was a cold morning
He warmed his body
With his cigar
But, he burn my lungs
And he damage my brain
He violate my right, to get a clean air
So I said, “I'm sorry sir, but I really care
About my right to get some clean air.”
And he replied, “well excuse me miss,
But I had to warm my body.”
The next day
I heard he was murdered
By Cancer
Scheme | ABCDAEBFGHHHIEJKD |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 10110010 110101 1101 110010 110110 11110 1101 11111 011011 11001111011 111110111101 011111111 010110111 11111110 011 111110 110 |
Closest metre | Iambic trimeter |
Characters | 425 |
Words | 96 |
Sentences | 3 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 17 |
Lines Amount | 17 |
Letters per line (avg) | 19 |
Words per line (avg) | 6 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 326 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 94 |
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Submitted on June 22, 2016
Modified on March 05, 2023
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