Analysis of Don't lie little child

Karolina Marszałkowska 1993 (Gdańsk)



Don't lie, don't lie little child
 For lies always lose their way
 For they always will resurface
 From the sea of words you made

Don't lie, don't lie little child
 Lying won't take you anywhere
 For it will hurt for many years
 And you can't say its just unfair

Don't lie , don't lie please my child
 Say the truth and I'll forgive
 Every mischief of your doing
 It's better than to drawn in grief

Don't lie ,child -you mother asks
 So tired after day of work
 I'll always know when you lie
 So don't lie child , don't lie


Scheme Axxx Abxb axxx xxcc
Poetic Form Quatrain  (25%)
Metre 1111101 111111 1111010 1011111 1111101 1011110 11111101 01111101 1111111 1010101 100101110 11011101 1111101 11010111 111111 111111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 511
Words 98
Sentences 1
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 98
Words per stanza (avg) 25
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Modified on March 05, 2023

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