Analysis of Deep Muscle Bruise



Just a little yellow bruise,
Shouldn't let it bother you,
'Oh that? I didn't even notice',
Then why are you still awake?

Just a little yellow bruise,
Hardly noticed it was ever there,
Ain't worth thinking on,
So go to bed.

It is only a little, yellow bruise.


Scheme Axxx Axxx a
Poetic Form
Metre 1010101 1011101 111101010 1111101 1010101 101011101 11101 1111 1110010101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 250
Words 48
Sentences 4
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 1
Lines Amount 9
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 65
Words per stanza (avg) 16
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Akira Dawn

I just thought it would be interesting to get a little feedback on what I write. It is often quite abstract and truly not great (this is not my self-deprecation shining through), but I would really love to improve.I am inspired by the works of Mark Twain in particular, he is amongst the wisest men ever to have lived. more…

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