Analysis of Dead



no hope no love thats how i feel
livin in a world where i am not real
i cry out but people don't care
i have a voice that you refuse to hear
so tired of this life sometimes wish i was dead
then maybe my voice will stick in your head
to be loved and excepted is all i pray
maybe i will be someday
so tired of pain can't you see
just want somebody that excepts me for me


Scheme AABCDDEEFF
Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Etheree  (20%)
Metre 11111111 100111111 11111011 1101110111 110111011111 1101111011 11100101111 101111 11011111 111011111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 359
Words 81
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 10
Lines Amount 10
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 286
Words per stanza (avg) 81
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Submitted on June 15, 2015

Modified on March 05, 2023

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