Analysis of Care



I heard her step on the stairs.
She was sad, quiet, sullen,
Whishing not to be heard.
I knew all of this by her sound, yes.
I had spent my time learning her,
Growing attached to her.
I only hoped I could talk her down tonight.
I loved her like a sister,
I only wanted to protect her.
I had hidden her blades before,
Talked her down even more.
But today she came into my room,
Hugged me and talked it through.
I held her close and listened
Without a single word.
She told me of her problems and fears.
She showed me the scars that her long sleeves hid,
And we erased them with our love.
I am so glad that now I know what a smile
And a listening ear can do.


Scheme ABCDEEFEEGGHIJCKLMNI
Poetic Form
Metre 1101101 1111010 11111 111111011 11111100 100110 11011110101 1101010 110101010 11100101 101101 101110111 110111 1101010 010101 111101001 1110110111 010111101 11111111101 00100111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 636
Words 134
Sentences 12
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 20
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 501
Words per stanza (avg) 134
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Submitted on July 02, 2014

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Denisha Irene Burton

I am an 18 year old college student in the US who loves poetry and music. I have been published twice, once at a national level, once on the international level. I still plan to learn more about my art and I hope to possibly publish my own book of poetry. more…

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