Analysis of Boy Please!



I feel like a fool because I waisted all my drool on him.
All thoughts at school on him.
All that space I waisted in my mind thinking about you all the time.
My request to be loved you declined.
The white lace I wore for you.
All the time I thought you were my boo.
I felt like a fool now I know you were a waste.
See you left me without a trace.
And you wonder why I'm all up in your space.
But gigga you ain't worth the chase.
See now I dried up all my tears and wiped my nose.
Hmm... You've come back,but I won't cut you any slack.
You present me with a rose.
Tell me NOW you're sure I'm the one; you chose.
Then you ask me for an answer?!
NO,boy please!


Scheme AABCDDEFFFGHGGIJ
Poetic Form
Metre 11101011111111 111111 1111101110011101 101111101 0111111 101111011 111011111001 11110101 01101111011 1111101 111111110111 11111111101 1101101 1111110111 11111110 11
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 642
Words 141
Sentences 17
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 16
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 31
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 490
Words per stanza (avg) 139
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Submitted on October 19, 2016

Modified on March 05, 2023

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