Analysis of Beautiful Melodies



Time has slipped passed us - here we are once more,
sipping on songs; beautiful melodies.
Eternity seems a lifetime ago,
where our sweet memories gambolled along
the quiet curves of love's fine-lined journals,
I crash delight against the shine of you.

Freedom, cool wonderful breath caught inside
fascination's exquisite soft whispers,
sacrificial musical potions dance
to the tune which flowers your perfect heart,
relax with the rhythm's favourite beat.

As clouds on winds blowing romance's sigh
we have bobbed along currents of hardships,
and now - our scents have merged again in days;
long, short, slippers of the gods we wave at,
with our spirits flapping wings while laughter
streaks through the magical moments of now.

Freedom, cool wonderful breath caught inside
fascination's exquisite soft whispers,
sacrificial musical potions dance
to the tune which flowers your perfect heart,
relax with the rhythm's favourite beat.

Here we are once more; sipping white wine songs,
here we are once more; sipping white wine songs.

Freedom, cool wonderful breath caught inside
fascination's exquisite soft whispers,
sacrificial musical potions dance
to the tune which flowers your perfect heart,
relax with the rhythm's favourite beat.

Here we are once more; sipping white wine songs,
here we are once more; sipping white wine songs,
relax with the rhythm's favourite beat.


Scheme xxxxxx ABCDE xxxxxx ABCDE FF ABCDE FFE
Poetic Form
Metre 1111111111 1011100100 010010101 1101100101 0101111110 1101010111 1011001101 1100110 010100101 1011101011 0110111 11111011 1110110110 01101110101 1110101111 11010101110 1101001011 1011001101 1100110 010100101 1011101011 0110111 1111110111 1111110111 1011001101 1100110 010100101 1011101011 0110111 1111110111 1111110111 0110111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,339
Words 215
Sentences 9
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 6, 5, 6, 5, 2, 5, 3
Lines Amount 32
Letters per line (avg) 35
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 159
Words per stanza (avg) 31
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Submitted on June 04, 2010

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Ian Sawicki

Ian Sawicki has been writing poetry for over twenty years. He is a Manchester born poet, who has dedicated his life to exploration and composition of poetry. His work reflects the many great influential experiences of his life, the pain, the pleasure combined to create new exciting poetry. If anyone is interested in my books then please visit my lulu storefront. All artwork on these books is by my own hand. http://stores.lulu.com/chasingtheday more…

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