Analysis of Away, away



I gave no thought to moan
Content to sit alone
But then you gave your words as bait
Was my mistake, I ate
No more to sit alone
Now I yearn, I groan
Seems you meant it so to be
You'd draw a part of me
Passions soar and friendship dies
Jewels we now deny
To deal with me this cruel, cruel, way
It eats away,away


Scheme AABBAACCDEFF
Poetic Form
Metre 111111 101101 11111111 110111 111101 11111 1111111 110111 1010101 101101 1111110101 111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 298
Words 67
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 12
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 238
Words per stanza (avg) 66
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Desiree Brooks

I am a nurse and a mother of three grown children. I have been writing poetry since I was a teenager. I love expressing myself on paper. I am a pastor's wife. We pastor a small church in Media, Pa. We are presently debating with a group of people on U-Tube who say that the world will end on May 21, 2011. Our U-Tube channel is, pastorBillandDesi more…

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