Analysis of - Smoke 3 Miles Away - (1st poem of my album #4, "For the Children")



In and out
Smoke 20 cigarettes
Harmed and calmed
Smoke 3 miles away
One hand in the feed hole
You cough rough and tough
I want my little siblings to survive
Cancer want people to die
I'm having a hard time breathing
Nobody seems to be quitting
Marlboro and Winston
Smoke all types of brands
Local and outsider
Continued stops in lands
Tobacco in smelly hands
Step by push
Take the step and push to protect the natural bush
Help keep the bush lush
Electronic and pure
Smoke 3 miles away
I want the children to live
Healthfully strive and thrive
Drive away 3 miles away.


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Poetic Form
Metre 001 101 101 1101 110011 11101 1111010101 1011011 11001110 111110 100010 11111 100010 010101 010101 111 1010110101001 11011 01001 1101 1101011 1101 101101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 546
Words 106
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 23
Lines Amount 23
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 461
Words per stanza (avg) 106
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Submitted on May 12, 2016

Modified on March 05, 2023

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