Analysis of "forever" a Cinquain Garland



Sunbeams,
held me over,
interwoven in time,
just to hear you say beautiful,
one line.

So much,
from so little,
intervened deep inside,
splitting me open forevermore,
sublime.

For you,
I hold the sea,
with all it's deep reside,
for all your beauty inherent,
to rise.

Statues,
fall from the night,
shooting stars from the sky.
moonbeams of you love angels peer,
to sigh,

Crashing,
on waves meeting,
crashing Kayla to try,
with a blink my Lady shining,
to cry.

Sunbeams,
from so little,
with all it's deep reside,
moonbeams of you love angels peer,
to cry.


Scheme Abcdx xDebc xaExa axfGf hhfhF ADEGF
Poetic Form Tetractys  (40%)
Etheree  (27%)
Metre 1 1110 01001 11111100 11 11 1110 01101 101101 01 11 1101 111101 11110010 11 1 1101 101101 1111101 11 10 1110 101011 10111010 11 1 1110 111101 1111101 11
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 524
Words 97
Sentences 6
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 5, 5, 5, 5, 5, 5
Lines Amount 30
Letters per line (avg) 14
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 71
Words per stanza (avg) 16
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Steven Louis Chapman

Steven was adopted, his biological father was an English professor who had an affair with a student. Writing poetry is an outlet for his expression of love. A hopeless romantic in search of his soul mate. (it changes from now and then) He hopes to capture the girl of his dreams through poetry. Visit my blog at http://thedailypoetrss.blogspot.com/ for the latest up to date poems. more…

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