Analysis of Remember

Emerancia Hangula 1997 (Walvis Bay, Erongo Region)



I was once yours
but you didn't deserve me

You made sure I was happy
so that you could take it away

You made me think I wasn't good enough for you
turns out,
you weren't for me

We gave each other everything
Yet you kept stealing from me

Was what I gave you not enough?
or did you wish to take my soul too?

Our beginning was beautiful
It felt pure

It felt as though it could withstand a storm tenfold
yet a light breeze destroyed it

One day,
when you have no one
and the world feels cruel
and you need someone to hold your hand
to guide you through the fog
Shield you from your demons

I held out my hand to you
and you cast it aside


Scheme XA AB CXA XA XC DX XX BXDXXX CX
Poetic Form
Metre 1111 1110011 1111110 11111101 111111010111 11 11011 1111010 1111011 11111101 111111111 100101100 111 11111101011 1011011 11 11111 001110 01111111 111101 111110 1111111 011101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 626
Words 133
Sentences 3
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 3, 2, 2, 2, 2, 6, 2
Lines Amount 23
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 55
Words per stanza (avg) 15
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Submitted on March 15, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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